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(chapter 1)

Readers POV

You could not believe what your (e/c) eyes were seeing. You were staring into, two big, round, electric, ice blue eyes.
"J-Jack Frost?"

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You laid on your bed, sketching something in your sketch book, something or someone you just couldn't seem to place a name to. you started drawing some crooked staff like object when all of a sudden, your window flew open sending a ice cold wind rushing over you.
You jump up and quickly put your hand up to close the window, until you notice all the snow that was on the ground. You decided you would go for a walk as you grabbed your favorite jacket and your boots, you also grabbed a pair of gloves then headed out the door.
While walking you kept your gaze on the sky, so snowflakes could fall onto your face, you just loved the winter, although the cold part of winter was what made you think twice about how much you like this season.

All of sudden the wind started to pick up and the snow started to fall faster and they hurt more because of the wind. You suddenly lost your balance and fell face first into the new freshly fallen snow. You started to drift off as you were passing out from coldness, when you saw someone running towards you, a guy.

You don't remember much, you can't tell if you're awake or not, but all you feel are cold hands, ICE cold hands gripping your wrist and caressing your face. You open your (e/c) eyes and they are suddenly locked with icy blue ones. "W-who are y-you?" you ask as the boy's eyes widened with shock.

"Yo-you can see me?" He was still holding your wrist but you couldn't keep his stare, your eyes traveled from looking at his hoodie which was blue and was covered in what looked like frost, to his hair which was snow white. You reach out a hand to touch his hair but he moves away a little, it was until that moment you realized he asked you a question instead
of answering yours.

"Hey i asked you a question first"

He looked at you and smiled. "My name is Jack, Jack Frost"

"J-Jack Frost?" how was that possible, Jack Frost was just a myth. "Prove it"

His smile grew even bigger as he ran a finger over your wrist causing frost to appear where his finger trailed along. You let out a gasp but this still wasn't enough to convince you. You pulled your arm away from him.

"Not enough" you quietly say to him and pull the blankets closer to you, as you notice how cold you actually are.

"Well how about the fact that I'm floating, here, in your room?" He just stared at you, as your eyes lowered to the floor where you see that his feet are not on the ground. Okay well that proves it. He's JACK FROST!

"You really are him" Your eyes move up to meet his which are still staring at you. "What are you doing in my room?!"

He looked shocked at your sudden outburst. "I saved you from my blizzard..."
'So he was the one who was running towards me' you thought to yourself. "T-thank you Jack"

"Its no problem. It's what i do, I protect people"
Why did his answer make you feel so upset. "O-oh, Right.." you look down and he notices that you seem upset. You feel two hands grab each one of your hands and you look up into his eyes.

"Hey, whats got you down?"

"it's nothing, don't worry about me" you lied, Of course you were upset, you were afraid of him leaving and never coming back. you didn't know why but you felt a connection to him.

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Jack's POV

Of course i was worried about you, i almost killed you with that blizzard , i was only making sure you were okay and honestly you seem like a really cool person. You're so warm... and you are actually pretty cute... Wait what am i saying, you're a mortal and i'm a spirit, nothing serious can happen between us.

I look over at you, you seem to be falling asleep.

"Hey, don't fall asleep on me yet, I don't even know your name yet" I give you a little grin as i see a small smile pull onto your lips

"My name is (y/n)" You smile right at me and honestly i feel like my heart stopped. No one, and i mean no one your age has ever smiled at me like that in a very long time. I smile back at you while sitting on your bed as you fell asleep.
Hey guys. This is kind of my first story so please no rude comments and i want to know if you want me to do a second chapter. Please let me know.

Jack Frost belongs to DreamWorks
Story written by me

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:iconzeldaloverrrrrrrr:
Zeldaloverrrrrrrr Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Soooooooooo CuteeeeeeeeeeeeeHeart Heart Heart 
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DarksideOfKelsey Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ^-^
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Zeldaloverrrrrrrr Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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detectivegirl15 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014   Traditional Artist
aaaaw I like the beginning :heart: 
I love this story !  
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DarksideOfKelsey Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much :D I'm currently working on chapter 3 right now, if you read 2 i'm looking forward to see if you have any ideas for me :)
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detectivegirl15 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014   Traditional Artist
You're welcome :iconheartrollplz: 
I also read chapter 2 it was awesome :) 

Maybe Pitch wants to use Jack so he can destroy ''reader'' or the world I don't even know why would want to kill the reader xD   
He tells Jack that his little siter is still alive, and if he wants her back he has to destroy the gardians.
Or Pitch could always kidnapp the reader :D that would be awesome too.   
 
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DarksideOfKelsey Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :iconspazhugplz:

I will make sure to use something from that :)
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:icondetectivegirl15:
detectivegirl15 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014   Traditional Artist
You're welcome :D 
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DarksideOfKelsey Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the fave too :)
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detectivegirl15 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014   Traditional Artist
You're welcome :) 
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